the inner demon commenting on zac and demos pining is such a mood idc they r bad they r sooo me im screaming !!! also im so so enjoying this such a good read truly im also charmed by murmur!! also ig i missed mike dating our uncle and thought he was sus bc he had hots for our uncle not bc he was that like omg???? anyways this is so amazing my best wishes!!!
This is such a wonderful game, well written and well edited, a beautiful heartwarming story. You are incredibly talented and one thing I need to say is thank you for the representation! I have seen plenty of IFs in which the MC is a genderlocked woman so as a gay guy who loves IFs it is really nice to see it the other way around, you have no idea how much that means to me. I will always appreciate you and this story for that! I look forward to any future works 🥰
Honestly, i have noticed that as well. [Where the game is gender-locked and whatnot] 🤔 my next 2 projects will both have a customizable MC, so you won't have to worry about being gender OR sexuality-locked. 😊
It's rare to see complete twine game, the premise of story is good I like it. I wish we can choose our gender and pronouns but that's already amazing for your first game tho. Congrats for the release can't wait for your new project
This is Demo and Zak's story, which is why there aren't any gender/pronoun options- which not only made it easier for me to work with the coding and whatnot, but also made it an easier story to write. 😅 But! My next 2 projects BOTH have customizable MC... from gender, pronouns to appearance and attitude. 😊
Unfortunately for DP, yes. Demo is the only option, only because this is Demo and Zak's story. 😔 I have a project lined up for Gabriel, where you get to romance him. And for Murmur... well, its undecided. 🤔 for now, they are getting a little side story where you can romance them. I haven't decided if they are getting a bigger game yet!
I honestly was just going to make it a little, tiny side story... but if enough people ask, I may make a small game out of it. I know a lot of people are interested in Murmur. Idk, we'll have to wait and see. 😊
Devi you made me cry omg. Seriously.. everyone needs to read this. Such a roller-coaster and I loved seeing the other POV not trying to give away too much. I said you should be proud and I mean it. This is such a great work of art and I loved every minute of it even tho it had me sad as shit at some points too.
Omg this left me feeling gooey and happy. Well done dude and thank you for sharing such a part of yourself and the hard work you put in with us and for free! My broke ass appreciates you. 😇♥️
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the inner demon commenting on zac and demos pining is such a mood idc they r bad they r sooo me im screaming !!! also im so so enjoying this such a good read truly im also charmed by murmur!! also ig i missed mike dating our uncle and thought he was sus bc he had hots for our uncle not bc he was that like omg???? anyways this is so amazing my best wishes!!!
such a good read :((
someone pls pay my therapy 😭😭😭 this is such an awesome game🥺❤️
i just speedran this game all in about 2 hours and it had me giggling and kicking my feet. so so very good
Hehehe 😊 I'm glad you liked it! And thank you for reading!!
This is such a wonderful game, well written and well edited, a beautiful heartwarming story. You are incredibly talented and one thing I need to say is thank you for the representation! I have seen plenty of IFs in which the MC is a genderlocked woman so as a gay guy who loves IFs it is really nice to see it the other way around, you have no idea how much that means to me. I will always appreciate you and this story for that! I look forward to any future works 🥰
Honestly, i have noticed that as well. [Where the game is gender-locked and whatnot] 🤔 my next 2 projects will both have a customizable MC, so you won't have to worry about being gender OR sexuality-locked. 😊
Thank you for the kind words and for reading!
It's rare to see complete twine game, the premise of story is good I like it. I wish we can choose our gender and pronouns but that's already amazing for your first game tho. Congrats for the release can't wait for your new project
This is Demo and Zak's story, which is why there aren't any gender/pronoun options- which not only made it easier for me to work with the coding and whatnot, but also made it an easier story to write. 😅 But! My next 2 projects BOTH have customizable MC... from gender, pronouns to appearance and attitude. 😊
thank you for reading!
Hey! So is Demo the only romance options? love him but gabriel and murmur hmmm😭
Unfortunately for DP, yes. Demo is the only option, only because this is Demo and Zak's story. 😔 I have a project lined up for Gabriel, where you get to romance him. And for Murmur... well, its undecided. 🤔 for now, they are getting a little side story where you can romance them. I haven't decided if they are getting a bigger game yet!
Thanks for reading!
At every chapter end I was afraid it was the last one, but I was so glad at the end!
I smiled, laughed and cried reading this, and can't believe it ended, but I'm so happy!
Thank you so much for making this wonderful story, I'll reread it for sure!
🥲 Thank YOU for reading it and leaving such a wonderful comment!
i love Demo so much Ohmygosh, but i must ask is Murmur special scene just a teaser for another game or is it going to be writen fully here?
I honestly was just going to make it a little, tiny side story... but if enough people ask, I may make a small game out of it. I know a lot of people are interested in Murmur. Idk, we'll have to wait and see. 😊
Thank you for reading!
Devi you made me cry omg. Seriously.. everyone needs to read this. Such a roller-coaster and I loved seeing the other POV not trying to give away too much. I said you should be proud and I mean it. This is such a great work of art and I loved every minute of it even tho it had me sad as shit at some points too.
Omg this left me feeling gooey and happy. Well done dude and thank you for sharing such a part of yourself and the hard work you put in with us and for free! My broke ass appreciates you. 😇♥️
😢 Thank you so much; for reading, liking it, and for the words of encouragement! Its people like you who keep us creators going, and I'm no exception.
10 goddamn chapters... thank u lord. I am soo pleasantly surprised 😅😇
The title really fool me, I thought its only the prologue and chapter one demo :v
Turn out its already 9 chapters, the story also really hokeme. I'm really curious about what will happen next :v
Really enjoyed it, can't wait to see where the story goes from here!
omg i really hope you get to have a relationship with both of them ( even though it seems like currently you only have 1 romance route- with demo )
Love it, I am really excited to see how the story will progresses
I am in LOVE with this masterpiece :0
thank you so much, I'm glad you love it! 🥺