The Story of Sin [UPDATE 1/24/2024]

Hey guys! 

Chapter four is here! In this chapter you…

-Learn what the hell Dani meant when they said you were in danger… or not? 
-Learn that Dani is an angel!
-Have a talk with Anya, if you want to!
-Have a talk with Dani, if you want to!
-Decide to take a small trip with Will. It’s totally your idea, and you are 100% ok with it. 

I feel like this chapter is a little smaller, and I honestly don’t know how to feel about that. 😣 It’s about 4k words per playthrough, which is about the same for every chapter, but this one just feels smaller to me somehow lmao. I might add a little bit more on, but just add it with next month’s update. I was trying to account for everyone’s Sins, how they would react to the stuff that happens in this chapter, so I have a few branching paths in this chapter that… really were just hard to write, for some reason? I think it’s because not everything important is known yet, and so I have to make sure not to spoil anything in the branching paths, while also advancing the plot equally in them, if that makes sense? Idk, I was just having a really hard time in general with this chapter, for some reason… But plot-wise, things will be picking up A LOT after this chapter, so I’ll probably have an easier time with writing from now on lol

I don’t THINK there’s any game-breaking coding, so you should be able to read from where you left off last time, btw! 

That’s all I have for now… See you next update! 

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